All Comments on 'Surprise! (Audio Version)'

I have to agree with the anonymous comment from your previous story "Valentino's Hands", if you would slow down your recitation just a bit, it would greatly enhance the sensuality of your stories. As they are now, they sound a bit rushed. It's a common error made when people read a written work aloud.

Folk can be remarkably ungenerous in their comments. Given this is only your second audio I thought it was fine. I didn't find the deliver too fast, and rather enjoyed the understated tone. Your judicious use of the occasional cunt, clit and cum is all the more arousing for that clipped voice - better that than the faux ecstasy that belabours some audios. Just the right length for a satisfying wank and a nice little twist at the end too. I would encourage you to keep on posting, and not be put off my mean spirited and unnecessary carping.