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by LewsBabyBoo

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tallman441tallman441about 2 months ago

Good story. A little rushed. Take it slow next time. Keep writing, I did enjoy it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Slow down a bit & make it a bit more intimate. That being said, now that the gate has been opened, continue to spread your seeds in their gardens & see what takes root & grows within. 4 for for being rushed.

rjb426874rjb426874about 2 months ago

Enjoyed your story and would love to hear what happens next.

I hope Mother and Aunt want a lot more of him,

Keep writing about this 3 some.

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I am new to sharing my stories with anyone besides a few of those close to me, but I finally up the nerve to try sharing them. I am 40, I have been writing for a few years now. It is a great way to express and share. I am welcome to feedback, but please do not be nasty about ...