All Comments on 'Surprise Vacation Ch. 06'

I really enjoyed this series. It was so nice to read a story or the husband and wife enjoyed adventures together without the wife turning into a wonton s*** overnight and cheating on the husband and screwing everybody and getting knocked up by a black guy.

Great story. Please post more!

I enjoyed all previous chapters. I also enjoyed this chapter until the "dream" part. It was, for lack of better words, a "cheap shot" by the author. The "surprise", no doubt.

I'm sure that others may have cheered. But I found it to be equivalent to "How do I end this saga? I have no idea." And succumbing to the usual endings that many mediocre TV shows go after.

I was going to gibe five stars for the writings up to this point. However, it lost with the ending. I will say, that it is as far as I am concerned.

I enjoyed the whole series. Good job!