All Comments on 'Susan and John Ch. 14'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Not one time

Did you mention the complete change for Joan to a woman by having 'his' cock and balls' removed. Joan MUST be completly a woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wonderful series!

Hope there is more. No need to emasculate Joan completely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Work

Hey.. read the full series.. its really good.. amazing.. u r really good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

update plz

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
I read ch 01 and then this

Thank god I didn't waste my time reading the rest of this crap. It's a rambling nonsensical mess, not credible on any level.

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