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All Comments on 'Susan and The Gentleman'

by MackKnifely

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zooliciouszooliciousover 2 years ago

I vote for a masturbation session next.

KevinandNinaKevinandNinaover 2 years ago

It's Claiborne, not "Clairborne"

It's minor but any woman would spot the typo.

Great story. Looking forward to more.

10towers10towersover 2 years ago

Excellent story with a future, but your grammar needs some work and a bit more proofreading. You lie down on a couch as opposed to lay down on a couch. You lay a book down on a table. Three more chapters seem appropriate.

daveylock8daveylock8about 1 month ago

Sexy as hell, even without actual sex between them

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