by penshockey1983
Just like that, wife becomes cheating skank slut and other wives are good with hubbies cheating right in front of them? Nope, never.
Your first submission. What made you think another worthless cuck, wife sharing slut story was the right thing to do? Are you insane? This will be crapped all over by days end, if it's read at all. All I needed to read were the first few paragraphs and the last to know it sucked.
Really wish Liter would add an 'ignore author' filter option on accounts, so you could make sure not to waste time with ridiculous sewage like this ever again.
Another cuck story of worthless depravity. Submitted for our approval is Susie, a woman who consciously makes the decision to dress provocatively in order to seduce her husband's male friends...in front of her husband and the other men's wives. Susie chooses to drink strong alcoholic beverages (she could have poured some out and added mixer) to enhance her buzz and lower her inhibitions. So she starts by seducing Jim (the one single friend at the party) by groping him and making inappropriate remarks. And the cheating begins. A sad telling note is that Jim, Bob, Tony, Susie, Amy, and Tina get names. Susie's cuckold husband never gets one as if he does not warrant the respect of having one. So Susie ends up getting gangbanged by three 'friends' of Susie's husband and two of their wives. Susie's husband chills on a deckchair. What a crock of cuckcrap! Who goes to a party and ends up stuffing the host's wife? No character here is worth their weight in the digital paper and ink it took to the writer describe them. 1
I didn't even need to read any part of the story. When I saw the tags, I knew it was going to suck and didn't read it.
A good first story. Don't worry about the negative comments - it just shows that your characters were strong enough for them to dislike them and after all, what else do they expect on Lit?
Here's a story I wrote a while ago
https://www.literotica.com/s/friendship-found-and-lost
Keep writing
Eve x