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Despite its prevalence in porn, people rarely scream during sex. They yell, shout, moan, pant, whine, grunt, groan, etc...but rarely actually scream. Stop what you are doing right now and yell. Then moan. Then scream. Notice that screaming is a distinct vocalization. It's not a catch-all for sex noises. Expand your vocabulary for an easy way to improve your writing.