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After my shower, I put on a t-shirt and some lounge pants and headed downstairs. Jill and Ashley were sitting in the living room where Jill had built a fire and I could see that Ashley had showered also. I walked over and continued stoking the fire as Jill and Ashley headed to the kitchen to cook some breakfast. We were going to need to have a good talk after all that had transpired. It was 2am and I don't think we were going to be able to sleep for a while.
Jill asked me to fix some of my legendary hot toddies and I went up and rolled another joint. If there was ever the perfect time to catch a buzz this was it. The living room was cozy with the fire crackling in the background.
Ashley had gone upstairs and retrieved everything needed to arrange one of our famous makeshift beds. There was our favorite quilt covering and upon it was a couple of comforters folded back and four pillows laying up against the fireplace mantle. Similar to earlier this evening, the darkness lent itself to an amber glowing hue. Once again, we found ourselves reclining back upon the mantle in front of the fireplace enjoying bacon, eggs, toast, hot cider toddies, and some good smoke.
I kept stoking the fire that Jill had built. It was a metaphor of Jill being an extension of me. She always knew what I needed. We all enjoyed the crackling flame and its warmth. The evening was going to go on. It had been another night of revelations. Once again I was a little anxious about this new reality. New bonds and new reality had formed as three had seemingly turned into one.
- COMMENTS
lorscaraover 2 years agoI just found and read BabyDoll and Sweet as Sugar end to end.
I can see your progress as a writer, and I enjoyed the story development.
Going forward I can see Jim giving Ash one of his most prized items, his favorite place, and building her a house on it.
There were only 2 sex scenes in the entire story so far that I had problems getting into, and they both turned out to be Wet Dreams, if you were intentionally putting a different flavor on those, then a job well done.
Contrary to opinions above, I see no issue with keeping Jill around, these characters are working well as a threesome, and I am enjoying them in this new light.
If you ever re-write Babbydoll, there is one thing that did break my suspension of disbelief, and you could fix. During the snow storm Jim pushes a button to open the garage door, how did he do that with the power out?
Otherwise Bravo, and keep writing
Middlesonover 2 years agoAwesome story. Between this continuation and babydoll i have never read a story that caused me so much anxiety and kept me on edge. I really hope ypubfind a way to give ash and jimmy happy ending!
They need to stop letting others make choices for them. No more big daddy, mom deciding whats good for them.
Would be nice if jj found out who his father is also. As much as i like jill who is a sweetheart i think the siblings need to be a couple not in a trouple. Ashley has gotten short end of stick long enough she deserves jimmy full attention now. They are still young to be a family together.
Keep it going one of the best stories i have read. So glad i came across it and stuck it out reading babydoll then these other 4 chapters.
Excellent ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Daddydonthurtmeover 2 years agoGreat story. I'm glad you decided to continue the "babydoll" stories. My opinion is this one dragged on a little. Maybe to many details. Probably could have had the same imact in half pages without completely hashing out his morning routine on his day off and other mundane taskes. Still a 5 star story in my book. Thanks for sharing and keep up the great work
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI love your writing. I have read everything of yours published here. I hope there is another chapter soon.
