All Comments on 'Sweet Revenge'

THIS IS NOT ROMANCE!!!!!

You obviously have a VERY hard time putting your stories into the right category, this one MOST certainly isn't romance!

Wtf I'm doing it for fun 😉😉😉😉

The how about you post in the RIGHT category, then it will be appreciated.

The storyline has many holes. You jump from first person narration to third. The story is too short. There is very little sexual content. You don’t provide any descriptions or characteristics of your characters. There is no plot to this story. If you want write take some college courses on writing!