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Anonymousabout 5 years agoVery poorly written!
The storyline has many holes. You jump from first person narration to third. The story is too short. There is very little sexual content. You don’t provide any descriptions or characteristics of your characters. There is no plot to this story. If you want write take some college courses on writing!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThe how about you post in the RIGHT category, then it will be appreciated.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoYou obviously have a VERY hard time putting your stories into the right category, this one MOST certainly isn't romance!
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