All Comments on 'Sympathetic Spirits Pt. 03'

I really enjoyed the story and the characters. I sometimes found the transitions between scenes confusing. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Thank you for sharing them.

ender2k2k, thank you a lot. I did a terrible mistake with scene transition not noticing that according to LE editing policies, all line feeds are doubled. I intended to use singular line feed for the next paragraph and double for the next scene, but the editors made them uniform. I especially appreciate your positive review of the characters, since quite important focus of this writing exercise was to make them distinct and to have different roles. Already I see that it could have been done better, but it's my very first "serious" writing attempt, ever.