All Comments on 'T4A+ Marcy: Spring Cleaning'

4 stars.

-1 star for bad tense.

It was a little too long. It was a little boring. 2nd page went on and on, with a lot of talking but nothing happening.

Fuck the bad tense complaint. There's far, far worse on here. This was HAF. 5/5 stars, and please do continue.

Dewey Cheatham

I thought your story was great, and i love the build up and the detail had me really imagining mom and son in the garage. I hope you have many more chapters of them for sure. i gave it 5 stars

Horrible writing skills.

I like the story and am waiting to see where it goes from here