by DrKingSchultz
You have done quite well with your first three stories. A followup is needed when Mom finds Sara and Dad naked. What happens next with Willow and Dad? Sleep together every night now that the taboo is shattered? It would have made more sense if Dad had removed Willow's panties to have seen her squirt after he pulled out. Watch the little details that can trip up any writer. I'll watch for your next offering.
Please sir, may we have more...
This so far seems to be a great series. I thoroughly enjoyed these first 3 chapters or episodes. And I look forward to reading more, when or if it is ever extended.