All Comments on 'Take Me, Tom Pt. 73-74'

Well done! 5*

Pathetic now it’s the parents fault.

What arrogance, what hubris.

WarGuy. So, that's what you took from the story? Hmm. It's their parent's fault? I don't pick up on that at all, but everyone reads what they will into it, I guess. I had hoped that I had put across the positives of their upbringing. Hubris? Really? I guess if that's the self-confidence they have in their relationship then, yeah. Sorry, you've read it that way, but thanks, nonetheless, for continuing to slog your way through it. One can but try to please everyone but...Regards.

Sad about the parents but, with time, I think they'll come around (at least I hope so).

Nitpick: I don't know about anyone else but I always think of a head shake as a side-to-side motion, indicating "no." While a head nod is an up and down motion indicating "yes." Whenever I read "...shook my head yes..." it throws me off a bit.

Excellent chapter. 5/5*