All Comments on 'Taking Down the Competition'

Good start!!!!!!!! Please do not let ratings score deter you. Keep going!!!

Are you kidding? This girl's going to drop out of college and be a slave within the hour because some cunt bullied her a little?

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honestly, for a first story this was really good.

Maybe take it a little slower with the life ruining aspects of Lauras session with her competitor.

And Sara gave in completely a little to soon, maybe Laura could have used some kind of blackmail. Or Laura has multiple sessions and threatens her with something.

Apart from that i really liked your story! Keep going!

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