All Comments on 'Taking Mom to the Beach'

by jimmyL55

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yangus99yangus99about 1 year ago

Second half was good but the fact she just got naked in the beginning seemed odd. Was there a history?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved the story,,,a bit short but very nice...

dirtyoldman1949dirtyoldman1949about 1 year ago
Mom

Sounds like mom needs more than you cumming on her breast you need to go home

And pump your mom full of cum and fuck her hard and good she is hotter than your Xwife enjoy life

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Definitely HOT, More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Badly in need of editing. Some sentences, you end up just having to guess what you meant to write. Too much work, for a story that's been done thousands of times before, in a literate fashion.

NesticNesticabout 1 year ago

I enjoyed it very much. Very hot and erotic. Mom and son-stories are the best. Please go on.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 1 year ago
A hippie finally enjoys free love.

Woodstock comes to fruition. Surprised it took her so long to be unencumbered with her son. Beautiful story of love that can go one forever.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 1 year ago
A hippie finally enjoys free love

Woodstock comes to fruition. Surprised it took her so long to be unencumbered. Beautiful story of love that could go on forever.

rodavrodavabout 1 year ago

Why almost all pussies in here always shaved. Maybe a trend for younger women though does not appeal me anyway. But for older women also shaved?

sargedog1sargedog1about 1 year ago

Lack of polish with missing words. Otherwise a good little stroke. There could easily be a continuation but you'll need to make it a bit deeper and with more polish at least for me.

FeltfixerFeltfixerabout 1 year ago

Liked this story, especially her age.

They’ve broken the ice now, so I hope and expect more chapters.

Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Not sure I could have stopped after I shot my load on my mother's stomach. I might have brought my mouth to her titties and began licking, kissing, and sucking on them. And hopefully I would hear her whisper to me....."I want you inside of me Tomas".

Had that happen mom would have been my woman moving forward.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Me I fucked my mom on nude beachshe has nice thick bush betwwen her gs extra large tits nipples extra large toothere was large group guys around once pulled she got another push in her cock put in her mouth sar watched they even double penetrated her couple times once they finish my mom looked wellfucked said how you fucked and sore

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