All Comments on 'Taking the Shoot Ch. 03'

I've seen Veve Lane at work, and this reminds me of how she subdues her opponents

I thought the rope bondage was well written.

The ending seemed strangely short. Like it just drops over the cliff.

What happens between the two after?

Of course you might be planning on another chapt. but I still think it could have been written a little better.

Like maybe have it stop after the time limit and have Sharon make some snarky comment.

Something like that. Still.....

5/5

J

Great story, SyPhigh. You wrote excellent details of MJ's journey into bondage wrestling. Your descriptions of her feelings were very believable, especially during the match and the bondage. MJ was fortunate to have a professional like Sharon to get her started. I will be reading more of your work. Thank you very much.

Great story can't wait for the next chapter