Tales from the Natural Order Pt. 05

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Susan had finished her hair and makeup and stood naked before me. I opened out the thin elasticated ribbon that passed for panties and knelt silently before her as she placed each foot into the open leg holes and waited for me to lift the flimsy and tiny thong up her long legs.

It was silent in the room as I pulled up the postage stamp sized cover over her labia. It was an intimate moment between a husband and his Wife whose lives were setting out on new journey. Was I saying goodbye when I eased forward and planted a tender kiss on her mons. Her reaction was, for less than a second, to push gently on the back of my head to press my lips harder onto her panty crotch. It was a tender moment full of significance for us both - and we both knew it.

She eased her arms up through the dress that I held out for her and, after shaking the material down her almost naked body, I succeeded to tie the silky cord fastener around her neck with shaking fingers.

'This will be very easy to undo,' I thought. 'I wonder if it is deliberate.'

Our private minute came to a very abrupt halt with a knock on our suite door. It was Ariana our baby-sitter and it was time for me to accompany my Wife to her second date with Raoul.

Susan looked meaningfully at me as she turned for the door and I couldn't help noticing her glance towards the small pendant and chain that remained on the dressing table. She said nothing but her disappointment was written clearly across her face.

Together we walked in silence down the corridor towards the lift (elevator). I could tell that her dismay at not wearing the 'ace of spades' was annoying her but I didn't care, because I had a plan of my own.

I stopped and felt in my pocket in pretence of looking for the plastic room key. "Wait here a couple of minutes please Sue," I said, ignoring her exasperated look, "I've forgotten my key. I'll have to go back."

Ariana opened the door to my knock and I went in to get what I needed, and was back beside Sue by the lift within less than a minute.

"Sorry about that," I said weakly.

"S'alright!" was her very short reply.

All eyes were upon us and the talking stopped as we walked into the bar. Had the word got around the hotel guests and staff that a husband was delivering his Wife to another man as his date? It was obvious that they had guessed that something was happening between the pretty blond Wife and the big handsome Black Man.

Jealous eyes from most of the Women in the bar immediately spotted the look of Love on her face as we approached the large man who stood waiting patiently for his prospective bed partner. Their husbands and boyfriends appreciatively took in the sight of the bouncing breasts and rolling arse cheeks beneath the thin dress and knew instinctively that this Lady was wanting a real man to take her to heaven with his big member. And they never looked at me - thankfully.

Raoul's smile was genuine as we approached, but the momentarily narrowing of his eyes told us both of his disappointment that the pendant was not around her neck. As soon as it was there, it was gone, like it should for all gentlemen.

Susan walked up to him, melted into his embrace and kissed him passionately on the lips. And I stood aside as they broke the kiss and leaned back to look into each other's eyes.

Over her head, Raoul looked at me and said, "thank you for bringing Susan to me David. And thank you for helping her dress for her date with me tonight."

"You're welcome," I replied, my voice shaking with emotion, "but I forgot something."

Susan turned towards me, still within his arms, and said, "what is it David?"

"This!" I replied as I removed the 'Ace of Spades' pendant from my pocket.

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Great chapter; my wife and I really enjoyed it! We really liked the part where the husband helped groom and dress the wife for her date with a black man.

My wife especially liked the part where the soon to be cuckolded husband helped her into her panties and then kissed her mons pubis. She wisely redirected his head so that he kissed her pussy - as if he were giving his blessing to her upcoming infidelity. Very hot! I always do that for my wife.

Also, my wife has me perform cunnilingus on her before a date. I edge her for 20 minutes but have to make sure not to cause her to orgasm. By doing this she is a revved up and is a real fuck bunny for her date which, is usually a BBC.

We are loving this story series. We wish all the white couples in America could read this and take it to heart. Every white wife in the country should be giving it up for black men, if they did it would solve so many intractable social problems.

Every white bride should be bred black on her wedding night. And that should be taught to all white couples during pre-marriage counseling.

A young white couple should receive a free, new car if they are willing to have the white groom get a vasectomy before marriage.

Or, they should receive enough money for a downpayment on a house if he is willing be become a full eunuch.

Then the white wife can breed black as much as she wants!

Great story!

cuk_let2cuk_let2over 1 year ago

Continues to be one of the best stories I've read recently. I like the pacing, though I do think there could be a bit more friction in the story-between David and Susan-a bit more reluctance on David's part-I am guessing that resistance to the Natural Order would be...natural (and it would be hot watching Raul overpower that resistance. I like that David and Susan's children are a topic of concern. If you want to present a realistic vision of how the "Natural Order" would transform current marriages, what happens with children has to be considered. Thanks for a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Outstanding work and really well paced. Looking forward to the next chapter which is probably the right stage for the action to commence. I like the idea that Sue is treating this as a fling on holiday rather than the start of a massive lifestyle change.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hi Derek,

Also wanted to let you know, that I love your story so far. I know the rating goes down, as it is quite slow-paced but I got to admit that your description of emotions, feelings of dominance, humiliation, and acceptance of the husband's submission is fantastic.

I encourage you to keep writing and make the lovers meet soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Derek, you are british?

I see Charles, Andrew and Boris in you.

Not William and Harry.

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