All Comments on 'Talking to Strangers'

by Daddysprettybabydoll

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Unique quality

I love the use of the “you” instead of she or he. It’s leave this open to the reader to interpret as they see fit. To me it could be a man or a woman. I thoroughly enjoyed this unique piece. Can’t wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A moment just for me, myself and my imagination

Normally it's not so easy for me to get into a story, especially one that isn't in my native language, but you created a story were I could just lose myself in for a moment. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Superb

A story in a first persons view is always interesting , it’s fun to read where you can actually portray yourself in the story.

Keep up the good work , I know you can do it.

Need a little of “rage” in it. *hint*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I love how easy it is to picture myself in the story, you create great imagery. I look forward to reading more from you

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