All Comments on 'Tammy Ch. 01.5'

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donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 1 year ago

Two tiny chapters two and a half years apart? I want to like this, but it seems you have no complete story in your mind to tell us. There's no law that requires short chapters posted separately. Please write the whole thing for yourself, then ask someone to proofread and edit, then post the completed story intact.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very hot story. Would love to read about how she gets even better at deepthroating black cocks. Looking forward to more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue this

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hurry up and write the climax already. I don't want to wait months (or even weeks) for the ending. You're a great writer and I love where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I agree with the previous comments. It feels like wasted time when you get to the end of an incomplete story.

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