by sinisterout
You seriously cannot continue releasing these every month. I will be dead by the time this story is finished. If you have the link to the full story please sent it or release it more quickly. You are extremely talented but no one wants to wait years for a story to finish.
Wow...I would love to say I like it, but...you have obvious writing skills, but you take way too long to get to the point. There is way too much about his job and other crap that just doesn't need to be here. The average person has a short attention span, but when you're reading porn it is even shorter and you cross hotwifing with crossdressing and again, just way too much lead in.