All Comments on 'Tango on the Razor's Edge Ch. 17'

Still oddly messed up but still oddly very good.

so she gets knocked up by Joaquin again, Nik gets to be the 'dad'. Sorry really messed up and beyond me. Chris should leave and not turn back.

WTF? The ending is why I love this story. Holly is the bitch that you love to hate, but can't.

How could you make me care about the protagonist all this time and then do this? I thought he was an unwilling victim this whole time. Now he’s just some fetishist who’s too weak to acknowledge his own kinks. Anyway upload more frequently please I’ll be dead before this is finished. You’re really good at this though

It is really past due time to do more than btb

I view consensual cuckolding the same way I view any other kink or fetish. If someone has a kink or fetish and is OK with it and how it manifests (or doesn’t) in their life, so be it. And the story does fit as well in BDSM category however Holly bringing her children into it, hard stop.

since the author doesn´t make a point of telling us that holly has a baby bump and even describes her belly as "taut" she can´t have been pregnant for long...and in the next chapter nick says he´s been gone for months

that means he can´t be the ACTUAL father of the child and this is either the single most disgusting bit of emotional and psychological manipulation in the whole story or a huge mistake of the author

Just what King_MacAulay said. Never mind this story is impossibly improbable it is just what turns some of us submissives on.

5*s