All Comments on 'Tanning to Entertain Ch. 02'

You are working full time but taking the odd afternoon off to tan. Where is the daughter you had in the previous chapter? Sexless second marriage? Please don't forget the "facts" you set up in a story.

Let alone a story. Too little information in this sad little tale. And you do know there is a category for Exhibitionism, right?

1 star

Please just let it go now, don’t prolong the agony

However you could use an editor, or at least some one to simply read it through next time before you post. This seemed jus a bit disjointed as well. Maybe a but of recap as to what happened in chapter one to get to this point.

Worse than the first episode.

Just as I thought…..your story is getting better. Thanks for the thoughts