All Comments on 'Tara Ch. 03'

This is another great chapter of Tara's beginnings. I am enjoying the evolution of both Lindsey and Tara. While Tara is calm, she is nothing like the Tara we saw in the previous story.

Very nice; like the pace and engagement between/insight into Tara and Lindsey. And the sex fit so well with the storyline rather than tacked on as sidebar to titillate. You have this reader engrossed.

Thank you for the critique. Lindsey's, as well as Tara's journey, is an interesting one, to say the least. With Tara, it's putting the finishing touches on what she is in Damage Control. With Lindsey, it's been much more fun to write about since she's a blank slate and is completely outside of her comfort zone. I'm hoping chapter four will be as well received.

Thank you for reading