All Comments on 'Tarton Ch. 06'

You are such a tease! Bringing Dr. Trent back to mess with June's head? I wonder where this clinic is? Maybe Switzerland with all the cleanliness and scent of pine trees? What happened to Sylvia is beyond imagination (although not yours!) and to the poor unfortunate, tortured, original woman, Molly. People can be seriously mean, and evil, can't they. (No, that's not a question.) I hope Nathan gets his comeuppance, but he surely won't, unless it's in the form of Toby. Simon and Mia sounds like something sexy, since Simon knows the ropes, thanks to Cynthia. What a cast of characters! Well done. 5*~~JB

There's little I can add to JBEdwards comments on this story, he's hit the nail squarely on the head. This is turning into a real 'pot boiler' rather like your classic tale of nephew Jake from some time back. There's just enough teasing in each chapter to keep us coming back for more, you know your craft! It's a good story, I'm enjoying it more and more. It's 5 Stars from me again, and a favourite too.