All Comments on 'Tarton Ch. 16'

You did it! Wow, wow, wow what an ending. SylviaG your imagination is astounding. I love the way you tied together all the loose threads, and you've made me very happy I'm not descended from Molly Redcar. I'm not, right? No, I couldn't be ... unless ... Well, anyway, it's a great story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, especially -- of course -- the character of Sylvia. Kudos. 5*~~JB

It all tied together really neatly at the end. Good but complex tale, and I loved the explicitly detailed description of Sylvia's hard fucking while tethered to the bed, she really is a whore, totally in love with cock! Glad to see Olive got her comeuppance as she deserved. Nice subtle dig at British politicians too ! Well worthy of another 5 Stars and filing in my favourites section.