All Comments on 'Teacher’s Nightmare Ch. 01'

I hope she wins and takes the bully down maybe the brother gets his own revenge threw fucking the bully’s girlfriend

Frankly, who wouldnt have fucked her? Who wouldnt have leveraged her to become his needy sex slave?

Good stuff. A bit of character build up would have helped. There are many ways that this can go now. Thanks.

Just bite his cock off.

It’s great please keep going, make her into a school slave and force her to be a schoolgirl. Make her become the boyfriend of the ugliest boy in the school

Good job. Looking forward to other parts where Lewis degrades and uses her like a cheap slut while she gets aroused uncontrollably every time he touches her

GREAT START, HOPE THERE IS MORE TO COME!

Lewis could make her his sex slave and prostitute.

Treat her like an animal with a collar and leash and call him master.

And body modifications like piercings to her pussy, nipples and tongue.

And humiliation and degradation where she teaches.

Why do you have to refer to yourself in the third person as this whore or this slut?

and glory hole.

A threesome between Lewis, his girlfriend and Daisy would be hot.

But I hope for a happy ending with Lewis in prison

Like the story but holy god the run-on sentences are something else. Hope you continue, but get an editor probably.

Well, a very good start. She is going to be willing slave to Lewis in many, many ways. I can see frat parties, video parties, friends of Lewis coming over from time to time, gloryholes, sybian riding, bondage, and many other things. Please continue.

The punctuation or lack there of is atrocious and makes it too hard to follow. Quit reading before the end of the 2nd chapter

Did you even bother to proof read this story? The number of errors is staggering. Use a grammar checker and do some proof reading. It seems like a poorly executed first attempt but could have been a good story with some editing. Do some more work on improving your stories before you upload them.

Ha ha, run on sentences, punctuation, etc. Crack me up. Is this English 101 or a porn story? I thought a really good start. I like the 'willing/reluctant' slave ideas but also get the 60 year old teacher/coach involved...keep going (and, imho, don't worry about editor). Cheers.

great start hope she gets revenge on him maybe a baseball bat to his knee ruining his football career

Have Mr. Evans vuee the video and take over her blackmail.

Thank you for the comments both good and bad. I promise that I’ve taken each and every one of them on board.

Chapter 2 is written and is currently pending so hopefully it should be available in the next few days.

Unlike the first chapter which I possibly rushed a little, I’ve tried much harder with my grammar etc. I hope this makes it easier to read.

Hope she fucks her brother, it would be soo hot

Grt stuff

More humiliation in the classroom