All Comments on 'Teacher's Permisson'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Interesting premise.

But everything is rushed. Especially the sex.

Not nearly enough details.

Once Jerome admitted that he and other straight boys/men in the class had admired her 'attributes', he should have been questioned anout whether he'd thought about her while masturbating. If so, what did he think about? Her tits? What did he want to do to/with them?

Her ass? Ditto. Her legs? Ditto. Her hands? Ditto. Her mouth? Titty fucking?

Three stars.

DarkDecurionDarkDecurionover 1 year ago

Love the premise… it was well done but just a bit too short.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

needs to continue... feels unfinished with lots of questions unanswered...

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