by jtwy
I’m glad you finally wrote this new chapter. How many more chapters are you gonna write?
WOW, I've been hoping for part 5 to come along. Now I'm not sure that I'm so glad that it did. It's not like I don't understand the actions of both Drew and Adam, but right now I'm really feeling bad for Nick. It's bad enough that Drew treated him like a whore. But Adam kind of did the same thing by fucking Nick and then telling him to take an Uber home after bringing him there. I know Adam is feeling guilty for kissing Nick, but I expected better than this from him. Adam needs to apologize, and Drew needs to be told to go back to using his hand for sex. MLF
Thanks everyone for the feedback! I really appreciate hearing your thoughts on the series. There will be one more chapter, which should come out this week ;)
This was my least favorite chapter for many reasons. I don’t like stories where friends share their lovers with others - the 3-way was a huge mistake, Drew was a total asshole, and Adam was the one that came up with the idea originally. This was a big backward step, imo. Then Adam’s behavior was off-putting - his gay desires are clearly growing and he’s got feelings for Nick. But he decides to rim Nick for the first time when it involves sucking the asshole Drew’s cum out. Kind of an insult given he’s never eaten Nick’s cum in all these encounters! Then he kisses Nick and behaves like a complete prick sending him off in an Uber like a common slut. I hope Adam falls all over himself apologizing to Nick in the next chapter and truly makes it all up to him by reciprocating in every way. He loves fucking Nick but it’s now clear he also loves kissing him, eating cum and having his ass played with. Time for Adam to blow Nick, swallow his load and then get fucked by him and have his mind blown. Oh, and drop his friendship with Drew who clearly is a selfish dickhead.
Are you rebuilding the last part? Or will you show it much later because you don't have time?
YES! Thanks for your talent. I enjoy ur writing style. So curious how these two end up. So much potential. Dude...my dick is hard. Make me cum w ur writing.
I hope there's more, and, like some of the other commenters, I hope you take it in a more caring direction. I've enjoyed the heat of this series, but it seems like it really could be even more!