All Comments on 'Team Building Away Day'

Great story... over the top, but why not have some fun? Thanks for writing it!

So hot. None of the team building events I was ever involved in was like this. I’d have loved to hear the conversations after everyone returned to turn in their paint guns.

Fun story, but you really need a pfoofreader! A lot of misspellings, needed punctuation. At the beginning, you switched from 1st person, to 3rd person, and back again. And "squoze" is not a word. I had to stop and guess what you meant far too many times!