All Comments on 'Team Building Away Day'

Fun story, but you really need a pfoofreader! A lot of misspellings, needed punctuation. At the beginning, you switched from 1st person, to 3rd person, and back again. And "squoze" is not a word. I had to stop and guess what you meant far too many times!

So hot. None of the team building events I was ever involved in was like this. I’d have loved to hear the conversations after everyone returned to turn in their paint guns.

Great story... over the top, but why not have some fun? Thanks for writing it!