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Your OLD COMATOSE STORIES ARE D.O.A. Have Mercy.on this ZOMBIE DECAYED CORPSE OF A STORY. TOO TOO MUCH WORTHLESS SMUT. SHOOT THAT ZOMBIE HORSE. PUT US OUT OF MISERY. YOU CAN'T WRITE. You've proved it 41 times now. Thats enuf. No Mas, DEAR LORD! NO MAS!!!!

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This is written like somebody giving directions. There is no character development, suspense, story arc, or any kind of plot. If you just want to write boring retellings of your past, then fine, if you want to write something interesting you need to learn how to do that.