All Comments on 'Terrorized by My Muse (750 words)'

Altered Carbon reference, 5 stars. Probably never get the deposit back on this sleeve though.... The muse is an unforgiving mistress at times.

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Welp. That was fucked up… and so fucking hot. I’m way too invested in your torture at the hand of your muse. 😳🫣🥵

Even though not my thing, it was quite engaging and such a clever scenario. Well done!

Kind of scared me. Very well written!

LOL!!!

"Do you want a hint? In the book, he got resleeved into a woman's body for this."

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Fucky Friday? Oh... Altered Carbon. Lol

I enjoy these dark femdom tales, even as short as they are. 5*

The dialog was uninteresting. Descriptive sections were well written .IMO this subject doesn't lend itself to 750 words. For every sentence of dialog there should be 3-5 describing what's going on IMO for what its worth..

Curling iron? Ouch.

Four stars only because it feels like it is missing something. The "thrill" is gone, so to speak, compared to the first installment.

But, still. I like the way you write. 😁