All Comments on 'Tête-à -Tête with Tina'

Pretty good except don't write the story from first narrative of the guy if you're going to say "Tina felt alive" or things like that. He didn't know that.

just conveyed to a reading public the story of my entire married life except for Tina.

I've had a shit-load of Tinas in my lifetime but the description of the guy's wife was a reflection in a mirror of my own. I don't think my wife has ever uttered one god-damned thing from her mouth that wasn't a complaint or an order for servitude of some sort. Pussy was something that when given to me, was always used as a means to an end for her.

Well done.

not too horrible, but like the other guy pointed out, don't write from one persons view and then suddenly, in the same paragraph, switch to another. That's sloppy.

I liked it.

Not grammatically perfect, but mostly good enough. Quite hot, and refutes the argument that infidelity is always hubby's fault, no matter who does it, him or the wife. The wife is often given a pass due to husband's neglect, with which I agree, but strangely, the husband is expected to put up with neglect and frustration, and the blame is somehow always his. I hate that about popular culture. The neglectful spouse, husband OR wife, is the one at fault, regardless of gender! No more double standards and other such BS!

Be a man. If you can't live with her, then divorce her.

Don't use the children as an excuse. It's been shown that children are better off with a single parent than in households where the parents can't get along.