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Click hereOh! I have slipped the surly bonds of Earth,
And danced the skies on laughter-silvered wings;
Sunward I've climbed, and joined the tumbling mirth
of sun-split clouds,-wheeled and soared and swung,
High in the sun lit silence. Hov-ring there,
I've chased the shouting wind along, and flung
My eager craft through footless halls of air.
Up, up the long, delirious, burning blue,
I've topped the wind-swept heights with easy grace.
Where never lark nor eagle flew-
And, while with silent lifting mind I've trod,
The high untrespassed sanctity of space,
Put out my hand, and touched the Face of God.
- The six airmen lost in the collision between the P-63 King Cobra and the B-17g Flying Fortress are as follows:
a) Leonard "Len" Root of Fort Worth, Pilot of the Texas Raiders;
b) Terry Barker of Keller, Texas, Co-Pilot;
c) Kevin "K5" Michels of Austin, Crew Member;
d) Dan Ragan of Dallas, Crew Member;
e) Curt Rowe of Hilliard, Ohio, Crew Member.
The P-63 was flown by Craig Hutain of Montgomery, Texas and he was it's sole occupant. My work of fiction is dedicated to their memory. May God watch over their families and give them peace. Amen. November 16, 2022.
- Coast Of Marseilles by Keith Sykes. Recorded on the Album Son of A Son of A Sailor by Jimmy Buffett and the Coral Reefer Band.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous12 months agoFwiw, the sex POV thing can be as simple as switching from "she felt" to "he felt". IOW, some authors describe everything in third person only from "her" perspective. Others describe what "she" feels (him entering and stretching her deliciously, etc) AND what "he" feels (her slippery sheath gripping and milking his cock, etc). The latter option can be helpful in providing an additional erotic perspective on the action.
-a different anon
ScottishTexan12 months agoAuthor@ Anonymous who wrote: "Your stories are good. You got wat too much trade mark stuff and calling mom and dad..."
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I appreciate your position and opinions. But I'm not likely to change anything because:
(A) [Trademark] I'm writing a story that's ENTIRELY fiction but is located in actual real settings. You're incorrect about the lawsuit issue because the preface provides a disclaimer specifically stating that this is a work of fiction. None of my characters are based on real people. None of the sexual content occurs in the Trademarked businesses. They are strictly set dressing and nothing else.
(B) [mom and dad] When I began writing this a couple of years ago, I was dealing with the children of two different, but closely tied families as the lead characters. The parents were originally envisioned to be just scenery like everything else. But I guess that you have never actually written anything of your own. What happens when the story crosses over from OUTLINE to the WRITTEN WORD is that the story itself will push the writer in unexpected directions. I never intended to give actual names to either sets of parents. Mom and Dad alone doesn't work because there's multiple families involved as I said. Starting with Chapter Six, Mrs. Stewart has been named Halona. The other three will be named as well before the end of Chapter Seven since it's becoming a necessity at this stage.
(C) [Other Details] This has already been addressed to a certain point by adding the Appendix to the end of each chapter. For readers such as yourself who don't care about the finer details, you can simply skip the Appendix and move on.
and finally (D) [POV] Once again I will point out that you're probably not a writer, either as a hobby or a professional. One of the very first things that you are taught in writing class is the differences between First Person Narrative, Third Person Narrative, etcetera. Swapping around point of view as you suggested is BAD FORM and a rookie mistake UNLESS you have made notations to that effect and BLUEPRINT each and every chapter the exact same way for the ENTIRE STORY. That's far too much work and totally unnecessary in most cases. The use of Third Person POV is the best compromise for this reason.
But thanks again for your opinions, even if you felt the need to hide who you are.
Anonymous12 months agoYour stories are good. You got wat too much trade mark stuff and calling mom and dad by Mr. And Mrs. Don't make sense at all. Just call them mom and dad. Take out all the trade mark stuff and just put chair, for the restaurant just call it a breakfast place , burger place etc. As for songs just say they listen to country music etc. There is no need to add the deatlis if thebsung to include track# You're adding g tok much detail thay shouldn't be there. Also you did mention the trademark names and they can still sue you because they don't want to be associated with sex stories to include incest. Just take all of that out of your stories and you will be fine. They are good. Also for the sex scenes add more details. Maybe to POV from both brother and sister. Like how it felt for them etc.
ScottishTexan12 months agoAuthorThe derogatory comment posted by the anonymous person only one hour ago has been deleted with extreme prejudice. Next time, don't be a yellow belly coward and post it under your username.
