All Comments on 'The Adventure Pt. 02 - First Reunion'

by Boris6942

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AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Is it Roberta or Roberto? You keep changing the beautiful lady's name in several spots.

xDarkAngel0xDarkAngel07 months ago

Another lovely chapter. It doesn't have to be all sex to be sexy. A few little typos, so what, it didnt take anything away from the story. Keep going. I can't wait to hear their next adventure. luv Chloe

Boris6942Boris69427 months agoAuthor

Sincere apologies to my readers for the bad editing of Part 2. For the third part, and subsequent posts, time I did it old school with a print out, not totally on screen.

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