All Comments on 'The AirBnB Ch. 08'

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Anonymousover 1 year ago

Luce gets more unlikeable with each chapter and even adding blackmail in this chapter.

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyed the first few chapters. It was shaping up to be an awakening and adventure into new pleasures. Going too far into taking what she wants and giving nothing back. She's a good character. She just needs a little humility.

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Please explore the relationship with her gf more. Less blackmail etc. Looking forward to next chapter!

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Hello! I'm super excited to have started my journey in writing. Believe it or not, The AirBnB was my first story. I was so motivated by the respones it got that it's now a 12 part series, with it coming to an end shortly. So from the bottom of my heart, thank you for your 5...

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