by Darkwatch
Great story! Very hot, especially the buildup to the ending. Any chance you would consider actually making this book?
Absolutely loved this story from start to finish. Excellently written, fantastic characters, brilliant situations and certainly given me and my wife a few exciting ideas next time she wants to get in touch with her 'Dark Goddess' side. The building tension at the end of the story really was a hot way to end this compelling tale. Yet again well done.