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I had heard about subliminal messages, but I really didn't know anything about them. When I asked Freddy about it, he said he was very good at producing them. I contacted a production company and had a TV commercial made touting the wonderful amenities at the newly renovated resort and spa. I gave the tape to Freddy, and he placed the subliminal messages into the video tape. Apparently, when people saw the commercial, they also saw secret messages that convinced them they had to make a reservation for the hotel. I then had it air several times a day in Florida. When the hotel started getting massive amounts of reservations, I had the TV commercial air in Las Vegas, LA, and New York. Within a year, the hotel was once again the top resort in Florida, and they couldn't accommodate all the reservations they were getting. As promised, I became a partner and started receiving 10% of the profits each month.
One day my boss called me into his office. He told me he was way over retirement age, and he decided it was time to retire. He turned the company over to me. My new salary as CEO was almost $300,00 a year. With the money I had in the bank from my previous law suit, and the profits I was making from the hotel, I had a net worth just shy of a million dollars. I had a good sales staff, and if any of them had a problem with a particular client, I would handle it by letting the guy listen to my tape. I was getting more than my share of pussy, including my old boss's former secretary who was now my secretary. Life was good thanks to my old buddy, The Amazing Freddy.
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Master_Doctorover 1 year agolet me make a couple of suggestions. I liked your concept. The #1 rule in creative writing is Show... dont tell. The entire story you TOLD us what was going on. You used very little descriptive words. A small for instance is that you never once described much about the women or the clothes they were wearing. The only time you did was about the main Character. People get aroused at imagining what you are talking about. Describing a beautiful, sexy woman is far more than their hair color and Bra size. Im not trying to be mean, im trying to help you. As I said, I liked your concept very well. In addition for everything that you wanted to happen in your story it was WAY too short. You could very well have made a seperate chapter for EACH woman your protagonist took for himself. If I took a sexy women to Vegas and fucked her with my friend She would be wearing thigh high stockings, black 4in heels a sexy black cocktail dress and mouth mouth watering lingerie. If a MAN has a sexy, beautiful woman on his arm... not only does he enjoy showing her off... she usually enjoys being shown off.
Best of luck. Hope this helps.
Anonymousover 1 year agoYour concepts of a lot of money is absolutely laughable. The house you describe him as owning is worth way more than that.
