All Comments on 'The Arcade - Level 2'

Maybe a bit too rough at the end, but the main story is something I really loved.

Any chance of more?

Wow! This and the story are going into my favorites! More in this seties, please!

And a great 2nd chapter - well written, good grammar/spelling, good scene setting without being over complex and the characters are well drawn and believable, like the little bit of character on the side, such as John and Kitty at home - just adds the bit of reality that grounds the how delightful scenario.

Would love to see some more.