All Comments on 'The Assault Ch. 02'

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msblackstonemsblackstoneover 3 years ago
I like this less...

Nothing is wrong with the plot or anything, but I find myself weary of bratty teens, and a willing victim who gets some pleasure in the fucking ultimately takes some of the fun out of it, too. Basically, even though all of this was going on inside, I found myself wanting to stay outside and follow what the other soldiers were doing.

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