by Lisolette Gilcrest
Lisolette:
I was atracted by the title of your newest submission and proceeded to read all the stories that you have posted. You write well, no typos, very graphic, getting well into the mind of your character. Thanks, and looking forward to more of your work!
I love the way you used words to touch the mind. Within this story the words and mental images came easily and freely. Not often does an author have that ability. Good job.