All Comments on 'The Astronaut Ch. 03'

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Anonymousabout 6 years ago

I don't get it

I just don't get this idea of whipping being mandatory for being proper even after rereading all chapters. It's just evil, not everyone is a masochist like that! And they really should supervise this Grad when he does these things so he would actually give pleasure. It just doesn't gel for me.

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