All Comments on 'The Awakening of Jennifer Pt. 02'

I was looking forward to Part 2, and you did not disappoint! I loved the scene with poor Toby, and the sex with Henry and Peggy was super-hot. Five stars!

wow that was v hot!

you've got the start of a very erotic story, please continue

You are building into a very erotic story, keep going

I can’t wait for Jennifer to repeat Peggy’s words "Fuck me! Fuck me, Henry Parker, with your big, hard cock!"

And at the same time I hope this is some chapters away.

A rare writer who can tell a compelling and beautifully illustrated story, while delivering porn that ‘does what it says on the tin’.

Must confess to being a bit uncertain about the storyline after reading your first chapter — descriptively detailed paragraphs tended to undermine the eroticism though ending passages showed real promise. This second chapter picks up the pace; sassy, witty and frivolously delightful — so much fun to follow Jennifer’s unabashed curiosity and the suite of characters surrounding her awakening. The erotic moments you create in this chapter are near perfect — Toby’s scene is hilarious while easily so real, watching Peggy and Peter scene perfect mix of humor, curiosity and graphic sex, while Jennifer’s self-love is just that. Love so many of your lines: “Fuck, fuck, fuck," thought Jennifer, "I think I could get used to that word..." and “Poor Toby would have come by now," Jennifer thought to name but two of many. Looking forward to Jennifer continuing to satisfy her curiosity. So glad you discovered Literotica; thanks for sharing your creativity. 5 🌟easily

That little peeper, we should all be so fortunate to have a live lesson.

Another 5*

5/5, beautifully written! Thanks!

Love your writing, so descriptive,so erotic!!