All Comments on 'The Babysitter Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loving it. Can't wait to read the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I am loving this series. So well written and the anticipation is exciting. Great job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love this story

Dpj49Dpj49over 1 year ago

You’re a great writer. Can’t help but smile as Stefan and Ash get so excited while describing what each wants while pleasing themselves. Through your writing WE feel how sweet (and loving) both men are. Thank you

carmelcookeecarmelcookeeover 1 year ago

The actual sex will be fireworks. A for the phone sex scene

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I’m really enjoying this story, the first two chapters were a bit quick but this one felt just right. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

remy247remy247over 1 year ago

So good. Waiting for the next update.

Exluke1Exluke1over 1 year ago

Great build up with these guys. Can’t wait to read about the park… their first sort of date.

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Amateur writer who wanted to try their hand at writing smut. Let's see how this goes . . .

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