All Comments on 'The Babysitter Pt. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow, this just went from a really good story to something much bigger. That romantic dinner put me in the mood and that kiss left me breathless. More please. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Don’t just leave us hanging like this. Need longer chapters! I hope Ash and Stefan don’t dance around their feelings for too long and just have real honest communication about what this is. It seems like they (at least Ash) could become almost counter-productive if he’s left guessing and wondering and even obsessing about what this may or may not be.

Exluke1Exluke1over 1 year ago

Calling Ash “Love “ and Ash calling Stefan “Baby” and the romantic dinner date is so romantic for Stefan’s first guy date. These guys are so much more in love than they (especially Stefan) are expressing.

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