All Comments on 'The Babysitter's Surprise - Pt. 02'

by Meliss97

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MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikey4 months ago

Very good chapter two - I can't wait to see where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Enjoyable story but I feel like it needed more backstory. Does this guy have a breeding kink or something? He has a good marriage, loves his wife & kids & between the first chapter & second, he & this babysitter (whom he had never met before) only exchanged a handful of sentences. He doesn't even know her! Just doesn't seem plausible that he'd be so trusting of this teenage stranger. Just my opinion.....

Meliss97Meliss974 months agoAuthor

Thanks for your feedback. Though in part 2 we’re already 2 months further in the timeline. So of course plenty of time to bond.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Hot chapter. Maybe breed both together.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

We need chapter 3 with all the pregnancy sex.

byunjaesbyunjaes3 months ago

uh ohhhh uh ohhh

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

Wow! This will be interesting indeed.

JimDee676JimDee6762 months ago

Love the story. And that's a great ending.

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I love stories about my fetishes, and love writing them too. Sometimes I hang out in chat, but often just here. I write from both my perspective, and from the perspective of guys. In the latter case I often write it with help of a friend