All Comments on 'The Baroness and the Orc Ch. 04'

Story is pretty fucked but there’s a place for that too. I enjoyed it and hope writing it was a good experience

God damn that was a fun read! Do write more, it's great to read something with such a mix. Loved every chapter.

You really should have put more effort into either portraying the situation with the demons as absolutely dire, making orcs the only option for survival, or made the orcs more benevolent. As it is, the heroine comes off as a suicidal fool who actively and objectively made the lives of herself and everyone around her worse for no good reason. I know that suffering is the point with how masochistic the story is, but you still have to logically justify it.