All Comments on 'The Beat Pt. 03'

Wow! What a fantastic addition to your already very enjoyable opening two chapters. My main interest lies in the HotWife/cuckold scene, but as someone who bats for both teams, I also enjoy a good lesbian tale. And this certainly is very good. All I hope is that you don't wait another year before allowing us to know how Beth takes Mary under her wing (or even between her legs? 😘😛) and teaches/trains her. Whenever you decide to write it, I'm sure your fans and followers will enjoy reading it. This latest chapter gets 5 stars from me.

Just read all three stories and they are excellent. Thanks so much for adding this part, you are a brilliant writer and for adding your preamble. More of Mary's journey please.

A very enjoyable read and I am so happy that you decided to continue the tale. There were mixed signals between the women given out in the story. In the restaurant Beth acted all demure and submissive and Mary was described by Erica as a hunter but then the roles were most definitely reversed in the alley. Beth was the more dominant with Mary becoming the submissive. Mary's learning curve promises to make for enjoyable reading. Five stars again from me.

Chemical reactions, we need all our senses and physical attraction and then star struck we orbiting around …. Or even better soulmates meet and becoming one …. Now we will see whats your intentions with mary and beth ….. great dynamic and sooooo sweet

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