by nudedude03
Sorry, but although this is reasonably well written, it stretches believability past the breaking point. Such an Adonis would probably be proud of his body. Too bad his favorite teacher didn’t give his story a happy ending.
This is well written, but to unbelievable,first of all he had bad sprangs not broken limbs.
I liked the story, yes is a little over the top, but I've seen other stories where it's so unbeliveable from the first page. This was hot and unexpected, great job. (Wouldn't mind a follow up to this)
And this was under the revenge tag? The only way this could possibly fit under the revenge tag is if there is a part two where he is able to absolutely crush all of them individually and/or collectively. You guys need to get your act together.
I really enjoyed this exciting story. I haven't got any problem with the reality: this is only a hot sex fantasy. The hight point for me: when the two teenage guys help Eric to piss.